Sunday, October 19, 2008
journal #2
English language institute ELI is the best place for teaching English. Before I came to the ELI, I was in another school downtown. It wasn’t as good as I thought, because there was no particular system or subject, but I tried as much as I can to benefit from my teachers and improve my English. At that time I was looking for another school better then this one. Many people recommit me to about the ELI. Thus, I decided to come to the ELI. Finally, I think I’m in the right place.
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Mansour, this blog is a good place to try writing a little bit more than what you have written here. Try to expand your ideas by asking wh-questions such as who? where? why? what? and so on, and then answer the questions in your paragraph. This will give your paragraph more support, and will provide more interest to the reader. You can also try joining ideas into complex sentences, and adding more descriptive language.
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